Topic: am i in my place?
antisteroidsx's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:37 PM
this a song i really just wrote
about 5min ago

what do ya think?


am i in my place?
down and out

across the ground i lay

do u smell the hint of sadness

leaving from my veins?

is it written on my face?

i wont question anything you say

i wont try to hide

cant walk away

cause here i lay

am i in my place?

is it reserved for me??

to be locked inside this room

with all my demons screaming at me

i just wanna leave

but u wont let me

am i inmy place?

if sorrys what your reaching for

your gonna have to reach some more

cause im done with u

so lay

fadeaway

in your place


shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 04/17/08 03:44 PM
It scream's...........of hurt.