this is in response to etherealembers ballerina post

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/105820

she asked me for my version
i ended up with two, one about the ballerina
and one about the music box
(neither are as good as hers)
as follows...


Full Circle

dance your endless circles
my long time friend
you’ve danced for me
again and again
you were there for my
very first kiss
my first broken heart,
you’ve seen many of my first
my ribbons and my trophies
you even witnessed when i let
you know who, touch me that first time
and you hold all of my secrets-silent
the melody of A Midsummer night’s dream
filled the air so many times
though now,
not as often as it once did
you have held up so well over the years
i wish i could say the same
now today i close you for the last time
as mine
i hope you have room in your box
for a whole new set of first
and a place she can keep her secrets-safe
i know she can count on you
just as i know on those night when
i feel a little silly or perhaps maybe even
somewhat sentimental
i can walk down the hall
turn your key and you will dance once again
for me


kc08

I like it, pretty good.

Very nice Kevin!

Sweet.

I'm curious though.. she touched your what?

"you know who, touch MY that first time"


I think you meant "me" but it made me laugh imagining "my ____"

Another good poem.

thanks for taking the time

Good write!

thank you L_S

yes i meant "me" look i fixed it

i wish i would have had the chance to pass mine down to my daughter




S

thank you

really nice I've missed you

i miss me too...sometimes...lol

thank you ...

awww you know we care...

How did I Miss this one,,,

yes i do

i don't know...how did you

Hell I dont know,,,
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm must be all this painting and remolding I've been donin lately,,,

i know how that goes
i am back at home and i am about one month behind on everything
from yard work to laundry