Topic: The Beast Within
renomanlive's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:18 AM
The Beast Within

The exterior is proper and prim but I know the beast is patiently waiting within.

For far too long it has been suppressed, quiet but not calm lays this beast within for it knows it must eventually go forth and be free or risk ceasing to be.

The beast you see is Love, Lust, Passion and more that resides within the inner me, the side of me that is hidden from the world to see.

I fear the price of freedom too high to set the beast free, for I would need to open the gateway to the inner me you see.

So, until some future time and place the exterior shall remain proper and prim and the beast will reside securely within…

pkh's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:20 AM
very nice...welcome to the poem forum

renomanlive's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:22 AM
Thank you

I have posted several of my inspired thoughts here in the last two days. It is a great forum

davidben1's photo
Thu 04/17/08 08:32 AM
Edited by davidben1 on Thu 04/17/08 08:37 AM
your inspired words yanked these from my mind....

half of all beings are born into light

half of all beings are born into dark

each in light is as if dragged to the dark

each in dark is as if dragged to the light

none since the BEGINNING asking to be born

destiny the parent dragging to wisdom

good and bad both needed to see

as earth light and dim for all to grow

a grand drama to create timeless day

wisdom in time turned to timeless wisdom

night and day shattered and torn from the mind

floods of truth washing down cobblestone hearts

thunders ring out as lightening reveal all

fables as true and imagination as wisdom

night and day as lovers now embrace

tears of joy flood the streets

unity and peace forever more


MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 04/17/08 09:21 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Thu 04/17/08 11:13 AM
both you guys, jamming!!

peace
jimmy

davidben1's photo
Thu 04/17/08 11:57 AM
renomanlive......love to hear more ANYTIME :smile:

the words of another pass like water back and forth as drinks for the thirsty!

davidben1's photo
Thu 04/17/08 11:59 AM
come on jimmy......don't hold out.....your words have inspired more than you know.....:smile: drinker :smile:

perhaps i shall begin telling you more!

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 12:00 PM
Nice writes both of you!! flowerforyou flowerforyou



Ben write more and share with us so we can comment...

davidben1's photo
Thu 04/17/08 12:31 PM
my words are birthed only from the hearing of others words.....:smile: :smile: :smile:

renomanlive's photo
Thu 04/17/08 04:47 PM
I have one more that I am going to post as a new topic it is called What is Love.....love