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Suggestions and constructive criticism sincerely welcomed!
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How bout a picture to start.
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welcome to the
 family and join in the  and the  and have a   and yes provide a pic would be nice |
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ya know the blue boxes wouldn't be so bad...but those damned sharp corners...ouch
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ya know the blue boxes wouldn't be so bad...but those damned sharp corners...ouch Yeah I agree. They need a little smoothing. I suggest rounded corners. |
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ya know the blue boxes wouldn't be so bad...but those damned sharp corners...ouch You crack me up
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A picture goes a long way!
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most of us would like a little box, but pink, not blue
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most of us would like a little box, but pink, not blue
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most of us would like a little box, but pink, not blue I get the inuendo. You should be Ashamed.. Ashamed I say. |
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The second paragraph needs to be cleaned up a bit, there's a couple of extra CR/LF's in it.
Also, what you say is sounding just like any number of other people's, using all of the standard cliche terms and phrases, strive to be more original to spark more interest. The rest of it looks okay and is an interesting read. |
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Picture, picture, picture.
Then we can talk....... |
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Hello, and thanks to all of you. Couple of questions, though...what does 'CR/LF' mean? I'm not really sure how to be more original with my description of myself. Is the 'hippie' description common? I guess with my age group, it just might be! Is the listing of characteristics the problem?
Oh...I know...picture. I'm working on that...gee, I wish I were more photogenic! Thanks, again! |
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I'm not sure, but I think I fixed the 'CR/LF'. Wish I new what they/it were/was!
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