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Love's Tears
His octopus of a heart Extending tentacles of emotion receptors. Nerves running through To the sensory organs known by most. By your words, He reads; a tentacle end throbbing in response To the emotion depicted to his eyes. Again, one connected to his eyes One of extraneous touch, And yet another to his ears, He hears your cries of frustration, Knowing this frustration, unable to intrude; He cries Love’s Tears. The pride in one he loves, Swelling the tentacle receptors To brimming full Building to the overflow Of Love’s Tears. Eagle came up with the concept, the idea persisted, so I stole the title and ran with it, quite frankly........ |
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Awesome.
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I'm too dumb to know what it means but sometimes I get excited eating Calamari.
Am I close? |
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Zilla, Darlin ----- ummmm THUNK to your head which would mean in plain English, No. I was going to write nope, but I figured the additional two letters might confuse you, goofball
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Is there a Dr. Seuss thread? I dont feel safe here.
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This is amazing imagery! Kudos to you both! (None of us really work alone, do we? Writing is always inspired...)
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Edited by
VFury
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Wed 04/16/08 11:30 AM
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Is there a Dr. Seuss thread? I dont feel safe here. We could handle Dr Suess. Check out my "Hair Band" poem if you don't want something too deep! |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Wed 04/16/08 11:32 AM
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wench my love! you are sooooooooooo freakin funny!!! Zilla, Darlin ----- ummmm THUNK to your head which would mean in plain English, No. I was going to write nope, but I figured the additional two letters might confuse you, goofball |
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Im ok with deep as long as its one of the "Oh the places I'll go"
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Is there a Dr. Seuss thread? I dont feel safe here. I'll see what I can find for ya. Here's some ice for your head and yup its afternoon have a beer and I apologize for thunkin ya upside the head. I'll try to curb that urge in the future........
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Edited by
kc0003
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Wed 04/16/08 11:34 AM
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nice one dk of wench
and i guess i should include eagle too for inspiring you.... 
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Love's Tears His octopus of a heart Extending tentacles of emotion receptors. Nerves running through To the sensory organs known by most. By your words, He reads; a tentacle end throbbing in response To the emotion depicted to his eyes. Again, one connected to his eyes One of extraneous touch, And yet another to his ears, He hears your cries of frustration, Knowing this frustration, unable to intrude; He cries Love’s Tears. The pride in one he loves, Swelling the tentacle receptors To brimming full Building to the overflow Of Love’s Tears. Eagle came up with the concept, the idea persisted, so I stole the title and ran with it, quite frankly........ Thanks for STEALING MY TITLE...  No really hun you did a great job with it...  
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Is there a Dr. Seuss thread? I dont feel safe here. I'll see what I can find for ya. Here's some ice for your head and yup its afternoon have a beer and I apologize for thunkin ya upside the head. I'll try to curb that urge in the future........ I get thunked alot - That doesnt bother me. I got the same reaction when I visted the Smithsonian and asked WTF everyone was staring at pictures for. - It really is a cool writing, I just dont understand. |
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Here Zilla try this
Have you ever been so overwhelmed with emotion that tears welled up in your eyes? That's what its about. |
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Why you little thief you!
Nice write Baby girl!! |
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Why you little thief you! Nice write Baby girl!! Yeppers!! She's a thief alright.. SHE STOLE MY HEART AND I DONT WANT IT BACK!!!!
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Wench hope you don't mind me doing this but I want to help Zill feel more at home
 Check this out Zilla http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/101431 |
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Here Zilla try this Have you ever been so overwhelmed with emotion that tears welled up in your eyes? That's what its about. Are you telling me this poem is about the end of Old Yeller? Dammit I was closer the first time. Forget it, I'm hopeless. |
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Wench hope you don't mind me doing this but I want to help Zill feel more at home Check this out Zilla http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/101431 Thank-you. Lets not forget the classics people. |
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Here Zilla try this Have you ever been so overwhelmed with emotion that tears welled up in your eyes? That's what its about. Are you telling me this poem is about the end of Old Yeller? Dammit I was closer the first time. Forget it, I'm hopeless. You're not hopeless, 'cause yes old yeller does that to me and I cry with Savage Sam toooo........ |
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