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Topic: Gentle
Def03 Joined Tue 01/29/08 Posts: 910	Mon 04/14/08 04:10 AM
A whisper of a breeze passes through an expressionless valley. Each breath held tightly within my lungs refusing to miss a single gaze. Sitting motionless with anticipation for the next light wind. Inhaling each deep breath awakens every sense. The smell the mountain arouses passion. The brilliance of the valley eases the heart. To rest for a second on a bed of white baby’s breath is a moment that will be blissfully consumed again.

spiritsentient Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 2	Mon 04/14/08 05:11 AM
beautiful. thanks for sharing. *think you're missing "of" in "smell the mountain arouses passion."

Def03 Joined Tue 01/29/08 Posts: 910	Mon 04/14/08 05:15 AM
ty ur right!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 05:20 AM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 06:59 AM
That was very nice...

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 04/14/08 09:59 AM

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