Topic: Whispers
iceprincess's photo
Fri 01/19/07 10:36 PM
i hear them in the shadows
i strain to make them out
i know thier always there
just out of reach

i hear the echos
echos of laughter
echos of childhood memories
try as i might
to the surface they do not come

i stare into the pool of my life
i try to make out the disjointed pictures
i want to go back
to relive all of my life

would i do things diffrent
would i replay the same song
dance the same dance
would i fix it

a picture becomes clear to me
i see a little boy holding a a tiny girl
i see the smile he gives me
i hear his promise
his words "mommy she's mine now"

I know the answer to my question
the dance i danced to my life's song
is the dance i was meant to have
I'd do it all over again, and again
for just that one memory

My whispers my memories
slowly they may fade
but one memory will alawys float in my mind
My Son holding my daughter for the first time

no photo
Fri 01/19/07 10:44 PM
What a beautiful memory Ice, thank you so much for sharing it.

iceprincess's photo
Fri 01/19/07 10:47 PM
Your welcome it came to my mind as i was writing my post on god and i
felt like shring it with you all

karmafury's photo
Fri 01/19/07 10:50 PM
That was beautiful Ice.

Morena350's photo
Fri 01/19/07 11:02 PM
yes indeed Karma that is a beautifull poem!!!!!!!!

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/20/07 12:24 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 05:27 AM
thank You Princess...
what a beautiful memory indeed!!!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/20/07 06:04 AM
children and there innocent love is so sweet.

venusrose's photo
Sat 01/20/07 08:40 AM
Beautifully written and a very sweet and tender moment.

Cybear's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:51 AM
This is simply incredible and very powerful.I luv this sooo much.Thank
you very much for sharing this with us ice princess.It brings back such
precious memories of my Daughters holding each other.Godspeed!Cybear

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 01/20/07 08:59 PM
So you have been holding out on us again? Glad to see you writing again.




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