Topic: JUST A POEM I WROTE
bttrflyv2's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:02 PM
LIFE

LIFE IS AT TIMES SET AT A FAST PACE
IT FEELS AS IF WERE RUNNING THE RATS RACE
TRAPPED IN A MAZE
SEEING NOTHING BUT HAZE
SOMETIMES THERES SO MUCH PAIN INSIDE
YOU JUST WANT TO HIDE AND CRY
BUT YOU CANT GIVE INTO DEFEAT
ITS YOUR SELF YOU HAVE TO CHALLENGE AND BEAT
IF IT GETS TO HARD AND TO MUCH WORRY
TURN IT TO GOD AND ALL OF HIS GLORY
FOR WHEN YOU THINK NO ONE IS THERE TO CARE
TURN TO THE HEAVENS GOD WILL ALWAYS BE THERE
MAY YOU ALL BE BLESSED
WRITTEN BY: VALERIE 04-10-2008

7Kate7's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:04 PM
Very nice. It made this rainy day a bit brighter.

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:06 PM
Nice write thanks for reminding us all that we are never alone!flowerforyou flowerforyou

VirginVirgo's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:08 PM
that was a wik'd poem .. keep it up!drinker

bttrflyv2's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:10 PM
THANK YOU ALL GLAD YA LIKED ITflowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:13 PM
flowerforyou very nice

bttrflyv2's photo
Thu 04/10/08 05:31 PM
THANK YOU PKHflowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/10/08 07:41 PM
Very nice Valerie...it is the ONE that we can always turn too as well as friends, when we feel abandoned. Nicely put.

no photo
Thu 04/10/08 07:45 PM
drinker :heart: flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart: :heart:
Sometimes we don't really know why, but we are inspired to type
THIS, I feel was your work here, and ITS GREAT..Thanks:heart:

bttrflyv2's photo
Thu 04/10/08 07:56 PM
thank you both very muchflowerforyou