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Edited by
Up2Us
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Wed 04/09/08 02:11 PM
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FINAL KISS
There silhouettes stand at the door. Staring deeply into each others eyes. Thoughts of the night before, and moments of tears. Feel so much heavier then ever before. Memories of all the years gone by before there final kiss. With tenderness & kindness she kisses him goodbye within her soul. Home sweet home at times are a passing memory from where he is now. He still hears the distant childish laughter of his children hidden upon the wind. The memories of her standing in the doorway of his life, he simply can't forget. As his body begins to shakes from the coldness and his eyes' slowly grow dim. Within his heart and with his last breath he remembers there final kiss. With tenderness & kindness she kisses him goodbye within her soul. The angels gather quietly upon the battle field of life. The family stands in silence as the bugle floods the air with grief an strife. Flags are given to his family while she sits their remembering the final kiss. She's at home now staring at wedding pictures as a widow longing for a moment longer within there final kiss. |
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Very nice Up2.
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Beautiful!
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pardon me as i rip up your he-man's women hater's club card
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Wed 04/09/08 02:27 PM
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This poem was really hard for me. My nephew died in Iraq this past summer. Actually this poem is dedicated with total love to him & his wife.
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aww so sorry
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Thanks you guys...
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I'm so sorry for your loss... You ahve honored him and his wife and she would be proud to see this.
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