Topic: Await
Sharris's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:53 PM
Await

And tangerine, pink, my windowed lace
Blue the eyes that you would face
Open waiting for the thought
Kiss me now..alas and naught
For far your distance heart keeps flutter
Sorting through the past, lifes clutter.
So, I await the soon doors yield
Lying in my blooming field.
Kiss me once and more than twice
Love long the man, such sacrifice.

Raine Les 3/11/08.


MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:54 PM
flowerforyou

Remo1luck's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:07 PM
No More

Lavender flowers reside in my hand
not from the store freshly picked from land,
The insects still run my insides crazy
more like I swallowed a sweet tasting daisy,
See the beauty the blue round diamonds shine
the structure the nice refined lines,
Didn't know that they made such a thing
I thank you my maker for I sing,
I await no more, I kiss forever and love no more
Leave me to die on this shore,
With beauty in my arms and love in heart,
So await no more my life must start.


I LOVED the poem and wanted to reply by being the guy you were waiting on... hehe...
have fun wit it... hope u like

Reginald aka Remo

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 04/08/08 04:57 AM
Nice write (((Sharris))) flowerforyou




Remo welcome to the poetry section! Good write! drinker

jimz's photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:23 PM
:heart: I love the way u write:heart:

peace
jimmy