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Topic: I Did My Best
lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 08:11 AM
There is a battle Raging within me Look into my eyes What do you see I am strong Fit and able Yet it tugs at me Like a taut cable I do not like What I must do But I will not quit Till this is through The battle rages Every day Though I am tired It won't go away I have a heart How it does hurt I wish that all Could see thier worth Sometimes I hang My head in shame I am not better Yet we're not the same I fight for what Is right and true I ignore the pain To help protect you I've moved around From place to place You don't understand I see in your face I cannot abide All the disrespcet And so my duty I will not neglect I am so tired I've fought so long Against the odds Against what's wrong A day will come When I must rest I hope God knows I did my best

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/07/08 08:14 AM
(((Sister)))

Twitch Joined Thu 09/27/07 Posts: 6199	Mon 04/07/08 08:16 AM
Just beautiful hun

7Kate7 Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 195	Mon 04/07/08 08:16 AM
Beautiful write! If we all did our best and tried as hard as you there'd be a lot less pain in the world. Keep it up!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 08:17 AM
((((Twitch)))) ((((MsT)))) Thanks ladies!

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Mon 04/07/08 08:19 AM
Another warrior woman very nice

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/07/08 08:20 AM
Vicki If you could truely see the you I see through my eyes,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh My,,, Your words have truely touched me

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76392	Mon 04/07/08 08:22 AM
Awesome write indeed

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 08:22 AM
((((Kate))) ((((Dragoness)))) {{{{Denise}}}} Thanks to each of you!!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 08:23 AM
Awesome write indeed ((((Tx))))

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/07/08 08:28 AM
That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry???

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 08:34 AM
That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/07/08 08:41 AM
That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him. That would be a good idea for all of it....and bowing to the dear lady.

iraceslowcars Joined Sat 11/17/07 Posts: 5776	Mon 04/07/08 09:17 AM
beautiful as always!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/07/08 09:18 AM Edited by lurchs_sister on Mon 04/07/08 09:19 AM
(((((Ron))))) When are you going to be writing again?

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Mon 04/07/08 01:43 PM
u are amazing with ur writing.. but most importantly....you are a woman with a heart and soul..as big as the sun and moon....u are a bright and shining star... to u my sister Vicky.. thank u for being you.. Semper FI Sister Suz

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Mon 04/07/08 02:04 PM
You know you are one brave lady Sis, I admire your strength and your power to overcome your adversities. Blessed be !