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There is a battle
Raging within me Look into my eyes What do you see I am strong Fit and able Yet it tugs at me Like a taut cable I do not like What I must do But I will not quit Till this is through The battle rages Every day Though I am tired It won't go away I have a heart How it does hurt I wish that all Could see thier worth Sometimes I hang My head in shame I am not better Yet we're not the same I fight for what Is right and true I ignore the pain To help protect you I've moved around From place to place You don't understand I see in your face I cannot abide All the disrespcet And so my duty I will not neglect I am so tired I've fought so long Against the odds Against what's wrong A day will come When I must rest I hope God knows I did my best |
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(((Sister))) |
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Just beautiful hun
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Beautiful write! If we all did our best and tried as hard as you there'd be a lot less pain in the world. Keep it up!
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((((Twitch))))
((((MsT)))) Thanks ladies!
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Another warrior woman
very nice
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Vicki
If you could truely see the you I see through my eyes,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh My,,, Your words have truely touched me
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Awesome write indeed
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((((Kate)))
((((Dragoness)))) {{{{Denise}}}}
Thanks to each of you!!
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Awesome write indeed
((((Tx))))
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That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry???
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That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey
I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him. |
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That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey
I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him. That would be a good idea for all of it....and bowing to the dear lady. |
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beautiful as always!
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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Mon 04/07/08 09:19 AM
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(((((Ron)))))
When are you going to be writing again? |
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u are amazing with ur writing..
but most importantly....you are a woman with a heart and soul..as big as the sun and moon....u are a bright and shining star... to u my sister Vicky..
thank u for being you.. Semper FI Sister Suz
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You know you are one brave lady Sis, I admire your strength and your power to overcome your adversities. Blessed be !
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very nice
u are amazing with ur writing..