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Topic: flame
trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 11:42 AM
you cast doubts like shadows that flicker with the flame cause me to question myself your heat comforts but i fear the intensity i do not what you to burn me but i don't want to put you out

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 11:45 AM
Good one!

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 11:47 AM
Good one! thank you teddy

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 04/05/08 11:55 AM
Nice..

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 11:58 AM
Nice.. thanks bro

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sat 04/05/08 04:37 PM
Nice imagery!

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 04:40 PM
Nice imagery! thank you imagery is very important to me and my writing im pleased you liked it

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sat 04/05/08 07:59 PM
ooh I agree wench ... the imagery is wonderful ...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 08:00 PM


trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 08:04 PM
ooh I agree wench ... the imagery is wonderful ... thank you couldnt ask for a better compliment

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 08:04 PM
im always happy to see you liked it

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 08:06 PM
well written nice piece

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Sat 04/05/08 08:08 PM
well written nice piece thank you kc i try

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