To many times we make a mistake
and cause someones heart to break
Not seeing what we did until its to late
and send us to a endless fate
we try to notice when it apears
but cant see it because of our so many fears
How do you change something you cannot see
or try to be someone you cannot be
all u do is try and fail
and leave behind a painful trail
the ones you've hurt are more in pain
and from that you have nothing to gain
so please if you love someone
and i mean it with all my heart
Be there for them through the hardest part.

A poem i made for jen when we face a hard storm in life is it good or bad jw

that is awesome i totaly agree i could not say it better myself.

Nice poem,,, And in life, words are cheap
but showing will always be remembered.
To your thoughts here,,,,GREAT,,,nicely written..

yes well done

and welcome to the site

Thats a beautiful poem and so very true


Congrats with it

Welcome

very nice,welcome