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Topic: Hard pill to swallow...
johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Fri 04/04/08 08:36 PM
To be honest or believe.... what others may conceive.... what is my reality? Why am I here.... When so many years.... The biggest of my fears... became real.... I cannot understand.... I met all your demands.... yet the worst still.... seems to happen to me.... Love and hate.... Truth and deception.... Unconditional love.... and your misconception.... Of the vowels made to each other.... I was the first.... You where the latter.... As time goes by.... I still get madder.... Oh by the way.... Whats the matter? Did the pill you give me.... decide to follow... You... now!!!!!! ITS TIME TO SWALLOW!!!! LETS SEE YOU TAKE THE POISON YOU GAVE ME!!! ITS TIME FOR ME TO LIVE AND BE FREE!!!! OF YOUR HYPOCRISY...... Lies, deception, indiscretion..... are seeds you sown.... are now your own.... Look, look.... but you wont find.... a love as great... as mine....

jjkitty Joined Thu 02/14/08 Posts: 1109	Fri 04/04/08 08:40 PM
No bitterness here. I just like looking at those eyes! Snaps

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Fri 04/04/08 08:43 PM
I like your eyes as well

mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Fri 04/04/08 08:44 PM
Yessss....the eyes

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Fri 04/04/08 08:46 PM
What is it about my eyes???

mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Fri 04/04/08 08:46 PM
Please put on a smile, you look so sad

mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Fri 04/04/08 08:47 PM
What is it about my eyes??? Through the eyes you can see someones soul..

jjkitty Joined Thu 02/14/08 Posts: 1109	Fri 04/04/08 08:48 PM
What is it about my eyes??? One could get lost in them.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 04/04/08 08:51 PM Edited by LAMom on Fri 04/04/08 08:52 PM
To be honest or believe.... what others may conceive.... what is my reality? Why am I here.... When so many years.... The biggest of my fears... became real.... I cannot understand.... I met all your demands.... yet the worst still.... seems to happen to me.... Love and hate.... Truth and deception.... Unconditional love.... and your misconception.... Of the vowels made to each other.... I was the first.... You where the latter.... As time goes by.... I still get madder.... Oh by the way.... Whats the matter? Did the pill you give me.... decide to follow... You... now!!!!!! ITS TIME TO SWALLOW!!!! LETS SEE YOU TAKE THE POISON YOU GAVE ME!!! ITS TIME FOR ME TO LIVE AND BE FREE!!!! OF YOUR HYPOCRISY...... Lies, deception, indiscretion..... are seeds you sown.... are now your own.... Look, look.... but you wont find.... a love as great... as mine.... Love in the being,, and in the losing is an incredible pill to swallow in any form,,, I like this alot,, and hope time will ease the pain of the Pill,,,,,,

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Fri 04/04/08 08:51 PM
I like the way you can see the light in your eyes its really neat Im going to add you as a friend.

jjkitty Joined Thu 02/14/08 Posts: 1109	Fri 04/04/08 08:54 PM
glad to help.....

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Fri 04/04/08 08:56 PM
glad to help..... Thanks...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Fri 04/04/08 09:00 PM
Awesome write it is a hard pill to swallow seems what comes around goes around and ohhh how sweet it is to watch them swallow that same pill sure brings a smile to ones face. Welcome to our world here in the poetry section hope to see more of your writings.

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Fri 04/04/08 09:03 PM
Nice write. I think your eyes are pretty and thought provoking. You can tell a person's soul through their eyes.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 07:20 AM