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Topic: Need
Jillybean31 Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 815	Fri 04/04/08 09:41 AM
I needed for little, before I met you. I never have craved clothing, trinkets nor shoes. Desires do fade. Whims come and they go. Silly wishes and fancies only flit to and fro. Need is a staple one cannot do without; sustenance so vital without question or doubt. Since you, I've felt need that I never have known, an aching need for another I can not call my own. J/M

Peccy Joined Thu 06/28/07 Posts: 17181	Fri 04/04/08 09:43 AM
Nice write Jilly one.

Jillybean31 Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 815	Fri 04/04/08 09:48 AM
Nice write Jilly one. Just a thought sweetie.

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Fri 04/04/08 09:53 AM
from one poet to another you are pretty good I needed for little, before I met you. I never have craved clothing, trinkets nor shoes. Desires do fade. Whims come and they go. Silly wishes and fancies only flit to and fro. Need is a staple one cannot do without; sustenance so vital without question or doubt. Since you, I've felt need that I never have known, an aching need for another I can not call my own. J/M

Jillybean31 Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 815	Fri 04/04/08 09:58 AM
from one poet to another you are pretty good I needed for little, before I met you. I never have craved clothing, trinkets nor shoes. Desires do fade. Whims come and they go. Silly wishes and fancies only flit to and fro. Need is a staple one cannot do without; sustenance so vital without question or doubt. Since you, I've felt need that I never have known, an aching need for another I can not call my own. J/M Thanks so much

brimstone Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 622	Fri 04/04/08 10:00 AM
Sweet...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 04/04/08 11:53 AM


ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 04/04/08 11:57 AM


lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/04/08 12:19 PM
Nice write Jilly

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 04/04/08 12:21 PM
be careful not to confuse wants for needs both can be impostors and each can lead the mind astray

dejavieu Joined Sun 03/16/08 Posts: 255	Fri 04/04/08 12:50 PM
be careful not to confuse wants for needs both can be impostors and each can lead the mind astray I think that's the secondary statement of the poem...right?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/04/08 12:54 PM
To your need his hungry heart feeds, into your eyes, his passion lies. GREAT WRITE!!!!

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