let me know what u guys think of my new song

i dont have music yet
but dig on the words
[pos or neg please be honest]



violated
as darkness turns the light

a tear falls from her eyes

can the world hear her

cry?

FIGHT she tries

as she cries to save her

life. her soul IS broken

never whole again

shes been violated

humilated

he stole from her

violated,humilated

did he break her?



v2:there she lay

a darkened alley way

deep in the night

she sat and prayed

[dear god save me from this day

he stole my soul away

left my heart in pain

in this alley here to

die

but as i cry to u

i swear and promise to

not let him have my life

today

this i pray to u amen]

CHORUSX3

so as HER LIFE begins

let her story friend

make u a better soul

yeah



provehito in altium

I like it, IT has heart

thanks bro

has good flow and is saying something