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Topic: For My Brother
lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:07 PM
Here I am I just keep going For my brother Some love I'm showing There is a lot He and I did share For other people We do care He in his way I in mine But you see Our paths intertwine He was a warrior Standing to fight I am a maiden Supporting what is right We fought for good There together Our hearts they were Unable to tether We were taught By our mother To take a stand Yet support eachother Through all we faced We were close Like the thorns Of a rose I'm still here I must carry on He has passed But his sould lives on For all of you USMC Do not cry As he calls from above Semper Fi! There's one more chapter I wish to tell It's of our mother That raised us so well To you all I say OOH RAH! We'll meet again For a last hurrah

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/03/08 05:15 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/03/08 05:16 PM
Great Mother's raise, BEAUTIFUL children..... This is very sweet, and a great tribute to both.... Thanks for sharing this with us.......

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Thu 04/03/08 05:22 PM
Semper Fi my Sister Vic.... beautiful... as i print, I run out of ink, thats ok.. cause in a blink... I will have more ink.. to continue to print... with my new ink... lol.....there a poem for you Semper Fi I love u Suzanne

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:26 PM
To the first Girl goes a beer and cheers from me and my Little brother!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:27 PM
Great Mother's raise, BEAUTIFUL children..... This is very sweet, and a great tribute to both.... Thanks for sharing this with us....... I have a wonderful mother and without her I would not have had the wonderful man I ahd for a little brother turned giant! Thanks Terry!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:32 PM Edited by lurchs_sister on Thu 04/03/08 05:33 PM
Semper Fi my Sister Vic.... beautiful... as i print, I run out of ink, thats ok.. cause in a blink... I will have more ink.. to continue to print... with my new ink... lol.....there a poem for you Semper Fi I love u Suzanne Zanne! I love you Sister! I see you there with your boys It fills my heart like white noise You're happy there upon the sand Standing there hand in hand You have raised exceptional men They will stand by you till the end Each thier wars are off to fight Both are guided by His light You have done the best you could Giving all a mother should You have given them honor and respect For thier country to protect They couldn't do it without thier mother You my dear are like no other Semper Fi Sister! OOH RAH!!

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 04/03/08 05:34 PM
ver beautiful

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:35 PM
ver beautiful Thanks Sass! I think I'm only going to do one more but who knows it could turn into more...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 06:24 PM
here's the link to the collection http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/101197

AllenAqua Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 3895	Thu 04/03/08 07:11 PM
Thanks hon... & kudos to ya

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/03/08 07:30 PM
Lurch,, Stands up, Bravo my Angel,, Your words so incredible,, Beautiful my Sister,,, In your heart I hear him sing, In your Eyes I see His Soul,,, Within your step,, Yepppp that extra,,Yippity.... Ya thats your brother.

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Fri 04/04/08 03:32 AM
I loved the poem/My favorite verse however was the semper fi part/amazing vicki!

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Fri 04/04/08 03:32 AM Edited by nightruler on Fri 04/04/08 03:34 AM
my response showed up twice....strange

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/04/08 05:37 AM
((((Allen)))) Thank you! ((((Denise)))) Your words are like the wind through the branches of the willow; soft and sweet. ((((JT)))) Thank you my friend! Twice just gives it a little extra umph

ChevyLover Joined Mon 12/24/07 Posts: 215	Fri 04/04/08 05:21 PM
Vicki, I love it! I shared with my sister!!! Very good! Keep it up!!!!!

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 04/04/08 05:33 PM


lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/04/08 05:53 PM
Thanks Greg! Glad I was able to share something that made you want to see or at least share with your sister! AG thanks for the flowers and love!

ChevyLover Joined Mon 12/24/07 Posts: 215	Fri 04/04/08 05:56 PM
Vicki My sister and I am very close as you and your brother . I appreciate you sharing what you write! and my sister will love it! You are very talented! Love your writing and I have to get my stuff together here and share some more with you all!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/04/08 05:59 PM
Vicki My sister and I am very close as you and your brother . I appreciate you sharing what you write! and my sister will love it! You are very talented! Love your writing and I have to get my stuff together here and share some more with you all! Wonderful to have family that is close and understancs! Have you checked out the collection?