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Topic: Yeah, it sucks, but is true
Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Sun 03/30/08 05:41 PM
Downward spiral, can’t stop the spin Will I have the heart to give again? The appearance of strength, brings hidden pain The reality of who I am, at the forefront again. A life with no limits is one I have lead Lead not towards love, but business instead My lonely decision has cornered me at last I have no love to share, my loneliness will forever last

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sun 03/30/08 05:42 PM


EtherealEmbers Joined Sun 02/03/08 Posts: 6580	Sun 03/30/08 05:45 PM
I feel ya

Jillybean31 Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 815	Sun 03/30/08 05:46 PM


Jillybean31 Joined Thu 03/20/08 Posts: 815	Sun 03/30/08 05:48 PM
That was so good...sooo sad...

Bess1981 Joined Thu 01/24/08 Posts: 2	Sun 03/30/08 05:53 PM
That poem explains it all.. I couldnt of said it better

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Sun 03/30/08 05:55 PM
I thought it was cool,hell I'd even offer to write the next verse..great job rob

Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Sun 03/30/08 05:56 PM
I thought it was cool,hell I'd even offer to write the next verse..great job rob feel free to continue ir 'ruler. Thanks people

nonchalantwendy Joined Mon 12/17/07 Posts: 13574	Sun 03/30/08 05:57 PM
Hello Rob............smile sweetie.........

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Sun 03/30/08 05:58 PM
I'll be back on around 11 tonight/I'll email you and let u decide

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/30/08 06:08 PM
wow Rob, lol I think we BOTH "THINK" to much into our jobs,lol GOOD POEM...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 03/30/08 07:51 PM
That was a good write,I think we all feel that at times.I wish you luck

cnoteblack Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 691	Sun 03/30/08 07:56 PM
rob we wish not to be lonely until we cant wait for them to leave,forever alone i cant believe,its true the hearts in pain but hold out for true love if you ever want to truly be happy again...just a tired asss poem from me

Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Sun 03/30/08 08:56 PM
Hello Rob............smile sweetie......... you do make me smile wendy

Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Sun 03/30/08 08:58 PM
rob we wish not to be lonely until we cant wait for them to leave,forever alone i cant believe,its true the hearts in pain but hold out for true love if you ever want to truly be happy again...just a tired asss poem from me thats awesome. Btw, that is a big lobster

Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Tue 04/01/08 08:54 PM
thought ruler was supposed to finish this for me, lol

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Tue 04/01/08 09:10 PM
thought ruler was supposed to finish this for me, lol it sucks to be married to ur carreer.. Unfortunately some do that... All I can say ..is u r young and have ur whole life ahead of you.. With that you willl find the time to love and open ur heart to it..and the loneless will not be forever... Unless u choose it to be... Chin up Babe,,,u will be ok.. Nice write of deep emotions..nice to see one open up.. Suz

Single_Rob Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 8233	Tue 04/01/08 09:12 PM
thought ruler was supposed to finish this for me, lol it sucks to be married to ur carreer.. Unfortunately some do that... All I can say ..is u r young and have ur whole life ahead of you.. With that you willl find the time to love and open ur heart to it..and the loneless will not be forever... Unless u choose it to be... Chin up Babe,,,u will be ok.. Nice write of deep emotions..nice to see one open up.. Suz uhh yeah, that wasnt about me, uhhh, it was about my friends nephews 3rd cousin by marriage

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 04/01/08 09:13 PM
thought ruler was supposed to finish this for me, lol it sucks to be married to ur carreer.. Unfortunately some do that... All I can say ..is u r young and have ur whole life ahead of you.. With that you willl find the time to love and open ur heart to it..and the loneless will not be forever... Unless u choose it to be... Chin up Babe,,,u will be ok.. Nice write of deep emotions..nice to see one open up.. Suz uhh yeah, that wasnt about me, uhhh, it was about my friends nephews 3rd cousin by marriage OK,,,,,

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Tue 04/01/08 09:36 PM
thought ruler was supposed to finish this for me, lol it sucks to be married to ur carreer.. Unfortunately some do that... All I can say ..is u r young and have ur whole life ahead of you.. With that you willl find the time to love and open ur heart to it..and the loneless will not be forever... Unless u choose it to be... Chin up Babe,,,u will be ok.. Nice write of deep emotions..nice to see one open up.. Suz uhh yeah, that wasnt about me, uhhh, it was about my friends nephews 3rd cousin by marriage oops...ya just never can tell... sounded a bit like u..with you travels all over with work.. maybe u should look at ur write and think about it... Playing with ya..