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Tue 02/03/09 08:24 PM
Edited by Twilight_Eternal on Tue 02/03/09 08:25 PM


You have a fair few spelling and grammar errors though.
you have a few as well....Just saying


Could you point any out?
When you review my spelling, keep in mind I'm Canadian...


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Tue 02/03/09 08:17 PM

A fw grammer mistakes, but other than that it's ok.


A few grammar mistakes? :)
I'm sure I've missed a few.
Any certain ones I should take notice of?

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Tue 02/03/09 12:59 PM
You have a fair few spelling and grammar errors though.

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Tue 02/03/09 11:34 AM
Edited by Twilight_Eternal on Tue 02/03/09 11:59 AM

Hey guy... you should consider adding "... and my alignment is Lawful Good"!


Hey, you know what, I just might do that :D j/k.



When people see you parading a list of cliche virtues (that you'll see on lots of pages, once you start looking), it starts to come off as a bit fake.


I should start by saying I understand your point and I thank you for the input. As for why I don't go into that much detail on my short comings it's because (I believe)they are less general than the strengths.

For example, the strength of Honesty is pretty general. I've made it a point in my life to be upfront with people and tell them the truth about things. Part of it's an honor thing, part of it's people knowing that if I say something I see it as being the truth. (yes I know that reading this about someone online seems pretty fake, but writing something else would be untrue...)

Then with the short comings... I'm afraid of heights. Not that meaningful for the average person, but may be a sour point for someone who is eager to go sky diving.

I also enjoy watching a number of TV shows. Not because I don't have other interests but because the medium and the shows that have quality (under line quality) plot lines and stories have always interested me. I enjoy how similar to with books, one can be brought to a whole new world of stories. It is why I went to school to study the industry after all :) Some people may hate TV and may see my interest in it as a negative.

(Note: While I like books, I find that TV/Film worlds can be shaped more to what it's writer(s) intended. Where with books a lot can be filled in by the readers imagination, which is great in itself, it's not entirely the "vision" of the story's creator that you end up with.)

In both cases it depends more on the specific person that's reading my profile what a negative would be.

I guess after the above you could also add rambling to the list of short comings too :) lol.




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Tue 02/03/09 09:32 AM
I just opened this thread with the intent to post The 4400 :)

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Tue 02/03/09 09:25 AM

I'm interested in how my profile is viewed by others.
What stands out? The good, the bad, the ugly...
If it was paired with a nice letter would it generate interest? etc.
Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.



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