thanks guys..sorry for delay in reply...stepped out for a bit. i
believe a lot of women get disrespected and folks don't take the time to
get to know them...it's like the saying 'never judge a book by it cover'
ty for the feedback

Look at her walking, they said to me
Dress like that she’s a b**** indeed
Flaunting that body for all to see
Is that not the perfect remedy?

What about you? I replied in return
Walking down the street without a shirt
Is that not the perfect remedy
For them to cast disrespect on thee?

Judging appearance is deceit in itself
What she possess you cannot tell
Just looking at her with lust in your eyes
Is not a springboard to flaunt your desire.

The beauty of women is easy to see
It all depends on intentions you see
If you respect her, the way it should be
She do everything to satisfy thee.

What will you do with no women around?
Will you marry you hand to your ‘well hung?’
If that is your pleasure more power to you
But women my friend are irreplaceable.

Respect her and she’ll respect you in return
And if she don’t just leave her alone
There are so many women in the world you see
Pay them respect, for one is your queen.

Mark Hill

texgal you words said it all

thanks guys obstacles are always in our way...they make us or break
us..ty

that's sweet jen..i like that one

The land and sea the great divide
Separating my lover from me
We dreamt of each other with deep desire
Causing a great unrest.

She came to me on a ship called love
Landing on the shores of desire
My love extend from the depth of my soul
Satisfying her quiet needs.

Her love she gave freely like the air in the spring
She is the colorful clouds in my sky
My joy my pain my laughter my gain
Within her they all resides.

I remember the time I gazed in her eyes
On that day my soul was born.
Her actions and her words were oh so bold
They were what others only think and dream.

By day she is restless awaiting the night
Satisfying my deepest needs
She is the sun in my day and the stars in my night
In her my infinite dream lives.

Mark Hill

Struggling to make ends meet
Trying my best to fulfill my dreams
Obstacles arising oh so high
It will take a space rocket to pass it by.

No job! The unemployment office say
To get by I need to make my own way
Happiness is such a lost word
Existing not within my world.

I came home and opened my door
Her note fell across the floor
I read it with tears in mine eyes
She’s leaving me for the guy in the heights.

Broken, I fell to the floor
My whole world spinning out of control
I lay there as time passes by
Having no desire to even try.

After what seem and eternity
I saw my world, the way it should be
My big break came just like I envisioned
Material possession flowing without obstruction.

The true reality is at the end of the day
Happiness lie within oneself
All the added commodities are nice to have
But you can’t buy happiness so don’t even try.

Mark Hill

it's that time of the year when love is in the air :) ty

…..Silent Love….

Your silent love running deep
From the ocean dept where it keeps
In gigantic waves across the sea
Your love my darling came running to me.

I enter the garden blossoming with flower
Your love opening like fresh red roses
With delicate hands and slender feet
You brought me your love it’s mine to keep.

Your caress engulfs me like a blanket of desire
It’s you my love to whom I retire
Sleeping or dreaming you’ll always be mine
For you my love is my ultimate desire.

In your sweet smiling eyes I got lost indeed
Little dew drops of desire sparkling deep
Your sensuous lips for me to keep
Dropping sweet words like honey milk.

You are the sunset of my world
And the candle light that makes me glow
You are the huntress of my soul
For you my love makes me bold.

The communion of love holds us together
Its tender strands as strong as ever
Sour wine on your lips taste sweet
For you my love my soul doeth keep.

Writing to you is a tease indeed
Passions and desires keeping it real
Chains of love binding me to you
Forever my love I’ll always be true.

Mark Hill

that's good...first i've read from you nice work

well done poet, thanks

wow girl...that one is HOTTT :)

that's very nice michael...that's beautiful

that's nice...post some more...i'm fairly new here also but you'll find
nice folks here

that's really sweet jen

ty rose i know you enjoy reading them :) ty for the reply

you're welcome sexylady...my pleasure

Cybear that was really cool and poetic and sure feel free to use
it...txgal ty you're great

sure Dean i'll be honored

thanks guys...

i always think of valentine
with love beaming from mine eyes
will this be the time for me
to find the god made for me