Community > Posts By > erlymourninsun
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set me free
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so set me free,cause this is what i need. i think,i thought,i've seen this dream. stop,wait,theres light in my eye. intoxicated vision for intoxicated lies. whats a lie or two between me and you. see me now,or see me later. ill still be lying here on the floor ,and what for? the fear of standing on my own two feet. just not quite sure how to make ends meet. so set me free cause, this is what i need. this life is like a blade, that cuts me till i bleed. i see skeptical sights,of what they call free. with a mind to express what i believe. so much pain has crossed this face. to so many eyes,such sweet disgrace. theres time for change however late,so don't be late. i am myself i am my own man. past is past i know where i stand. so set me free cause this is what i need. wisdom holds the future,knowledge is the key. |
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well im searchin for my friends.
but there blowin in the wind. we used to be tight way back when. you never slow down but, your still getting older. and time goes by so cold. its one foot in front of the other. they say theres no way you will remain the same always. so i formulate a plan with my feet in the sand and a drink in my hand cause man. im gonna make it. im gonna make it home. |
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blah blah
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i remember the first time i saw you.
your brown eyes had me hypnotized. if i tried to ignore you. you shown to me like sweet sunshine. i loved the way you had my back like that. it was candlelight all through the night. but smiling faces often hide cruel intensions. the loving words are dust in the wind. every day it seems harder to live. somethings got to,got to give. |
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Topic:
hyperactive
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it a shame to tame a hyperactive mind.
let it break free from its cage. in a fit of rage. always trying to change so it remains the same. like the pitter,patter of little feet. bending in the middle to make ends meet. its tragedy that befalls on he. who try to tame a hyperactive mind. |
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poem
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i dont want to walk alone,
or live with regett. i dont want to be apart, of your sad warfare, i said. i need some time alone to check with myself. to take stock of my, of my mental wealth. so leave the keys when you go, dont forget to lock the door. dont let it hit ya, where the god lord split ya. i finnally realized,that it was your disguise. to keep me drowning in the shallow end, of your selfish pride. and i know the score im on the losing end,and i don't want to play no more. |
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poems
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show me a man that dosn't think hes a fool.
ill show you an unwise man you had your part in the disscussion you were part of my distruction i suffer from confusion if im not winning ,then im losin show me a man that thinks hes a fool. ill show you a wise man |
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Topic:
set me free
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thanks,there song lyrics now,it makes for good texture.
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Topic:
set me free
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i wrote it a few years back,following some hard times.
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Topic:
set me free
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so set me free,cause this is what i need.
i think,i thought,i've seen this dream. stop,wait,theres light in my eye. intoxicated vision for intoxicated lies. whats a lie or two between me and you. see me now,or see me later. ill still be lying here on the floor ,and what for? the fear of standing on my own two feet. just not quite sure how to make ends meet. so set me free cause, this is what i need. this life is like a blade, that cuts me till i bleed. i see skeptical sights,of what they call free. with a mind to express what i believe. so much pain has crossed this face. to so many eyes,such sweet disgrace. theres time for change however late,so don't be late. i am myself i am my own man. past is past i know where i stand. so set me free cause this is what i need. wisdom holds the future,knowledge is the key. |
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Topic:
well?????????
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dude thinks your being a little harsh eh?
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well?????????
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ouch!man. take it easy
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Topic:
well?????????
Edited by
erlymourninsun
on
Tue 01/06/09 08:44 AM
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howzit?
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just sayin hello checkin this place out
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nice!
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me to i think
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Topic:
THE WRITER'S WORKSHOP
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it a shame to tame a hyperactive mind.
let it break free from its cage in fit of rage. always wanting to change,so it remains the same like the pitter patter of little feet. trying to bend in the middle to make ends meet. it tragedy that will set on he. that trys to tame the hyperactive mind. "its the best i could do on the spot" |
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Topic:
poems
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thank you
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Topic:
not even
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did you feel left out?
did you feel used up? was more than you could take? i left out on your own. i couldn't save you. no,i couldn't save myself. i couldn't carry on that way. i should have left you long ago. baby now i know. not even love can save us now. its my life its my heart its my soul i feel no pain since you lost your control of me. so your born again. from a life of sin. where did it end? where to begin? all along you wrote the words to this song. it dosn't matter if im right or im wrong. i won't bend in the end. not even love can save us now. |
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Topic:
morepoems
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your welcome im bored so i figure why not mess with the computer c whats up ya know.
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i see.
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