Here are some suggestions (wording and syntax). I took out some extraneous words which tend to distract from your message: "It's been a while since I've tried online dating. I'm a single mother of a wonderful son, laid back and easy to get along with. I'm not into clubbing or partying, or easy hook ups; move on if you are. I want a serious relationship, but I don't want to rush into it. Some people would dive into a relationship after the first date; I'd rather get to know who you are and go from there... My absolute favorite place to be is the beach. But not MS's because it's nasty and stinky. I love Perdido Key, FL and Orange Beach, AL." BTW, I don't know what "MS" is; you might want to spell it out for geographically ignorant folks like me. Hope that helped. Cheers, Bikerpilotdanny =D Thanks so much for the feedback!!! |
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Very pleasant welcome to the mad house Thanks!! |
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Gettin too old for that anyway Mightymoe haha haha... what are you going to do when you really get old? 30 is a great age! welcome and good luck to ya! Thanks! You too! |
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Gettin too old for that anyway Mightymoe haha
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Thanks Soufiehere :)
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Just wanna see if there's anything I need to change or add. Any comments welcome :)
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Great profile!! Good, clear pics and interesting info. Good luck!!
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Good pic. Answer the questions and tell a little abt yourself
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