No one can really offer what profile viewers want to see or know so we all just guess.

I would prefer:
1. that you include a full body shot
2. that you show some dynamics of yourself in your photographs; all of yours appear to be "Kelly" from the office while in the office, it doesn't say or show much about you
3. you show that you have a sense of humor in your writing which is nice
4. you communicate what you want which is very nice
5. the first photo is out of place, while nice the contacts are off-putting and your face looks so different that I can't be sure it's the same person. The skin tone, cheek bone,and chin are all completely different.