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Dark Horse
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i enjoyed reading this poem Thank you 
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Dark Horse
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A well composed expression culminating in an empowering conclusion. I appreciate it. Many thanks! 
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Sands of Time
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Lovely  Keep writing  Thank you
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Sands of Time
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Nice write
Assuring and Ensuring All over Love pouring Exuberance Ever lasting! Thank you!
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Sands of Time
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A poem should be felt and the comments we make should reflect the way you felt as you analyzed it . However this is not criticism. Its just a positive compliment so you can work better on your next poem .
We as readers need WOW factor in Poems ! Looking forward for your next creativity . I'll keep that in mind. I've posted another poem. You can check it out if you have time. Thank you! 
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Dark Horse
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I was dancing to the poisoned tune you created
Blindly worshipping every flattery you said Never meant to be serious A convenience you can easily use I, who had been the wind beneath your sails Pursued your success, did not mind my fails I, who have put you on a pedestal Even my sparkle, I'd allowed to be dulled You never cared Deceit, treachery and betrayal are all you've laid You never recognized The sacrifices I made to stay by your side. Now it's my heart's turn to dance with pride Better to cower in fear and hide For this dark horse will not hold back In taking everything that is rightfully hers from the start |
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Sands of Time
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Nice poem   .Much Appreciated 
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Sands of Time
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I will just say it is quite Okay .
There is no Wow factor in the Poem . So , .....! JK.. No worries. I am always open for constructive criticism. It's an avenue for me to improve. Thank you! |
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Sands of Time
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Some people look
Some people see Some people give Some people take Some people love Some people hurt But Darling I assure you I don't belong to some. I'll see you in your light. I'll give you everything you deserve. I'll love only you to heaven and beyond. Till our very last moments in the sands of time. |
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Kpop fans?
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My ultimate is EXO, Sehun biased. Bias wrecker D.O. Been stanning them for almost 8 years. But I also love YG groups like Blackpink, iKon, Treasure. I also like Red Velvet, GOT7, and Oneus. Recently, I began stanning Seventeen. And Oh boy, I am drawn to S.Coups.
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Sex is sacred for me I guess. I do not agree with it. Maybe it's the conservative way I was brought up with. But still, each to their own.
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