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Sat 01/20/18 07:37 AM
Hey ABA,
My opinion: To start, you need a different "Headline".
If you don't capture someone's interest in your headline, they won't read any further.
Change "good people" to something less generic.
Grab their attention.
btw my name is Rik
Have a good day mate.