looks like your at an impasse...
you either fight for it or end it ya know
and its hard, i can see
Im sorry yo, these situations suck
if you need a friend or whatever dont hesitate hun!

thank you sooo much! Thats weird, I went and fixed it though! But ill send them to your inbox now!

this intrigues me
its refreshing
new
honest
real?
can I a writers explanation?

Okay, so Im in college, and Im a literature major, trying to get into the creative writing concentration
I have to submit a portfolio with 10 pieces of my work,
and Ive aleady chosen 3
which was really hard mind you, I suck at making decisions in general
let alone life altering decisions lol
so I'm asking for help! I have 10 pieces of poetry, and I need to choose 7.
Some of them are polished, some are almost there. and some have a good concept :)
sooooo
if you find that you have a little spare time
or want to help out an indecisive writer...
please lemme know!
post a comment with your email address
or whichever form of contact your comfortable with
and then I can send you my stuff! Id post it here, but its 10 poems... so im not sure
but yea!
all ages welcomed!
poetry doesnt discriminate on who its meant to influence!
and I would greatly appreciate any help you can give me!
Thanks again, even if you just read this and have no desire or time to help me
thanks for the acknowledgement!
-Christina

thank you guys so very much!
I really appreciate it :)

yeah, it kinda doesnt.
People look to look. Or see whose online
and it can be creepy...
but what can ya do?
cheer up!
Im sure all the younger gals will look at your profile :)

thank you ma'm :)

Painting the Night Sky

you paint the night sky with your kiss
every soft touch
leaving shooting stars in its wake
the caress of your skin
tugs the moonbeams be to glow brighter, and stronger
like the strings of my heart
strumming a melody
of longing murmurs and wistful sighs
your lips are swallowing black holes
draining the breath of my being
lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape

yeah... and people who are twice your age message you very creepy comments! lol I feel you yo!