"The best words in any language are 'Let me help' - I recommend these three little words even over 'I love you' - for helping is the truest expression of any form of love - in deed, which is better than in word."

Hey, a little objective feedback in cyberspace isn't a bad idea or a bad thing!

Sooooooooooo, Am I cute?

(written originally for "Sugar")

THE STATUE
The rising Sun starts forth at break of day
To shower earth and sky with her bright rays
Morning dawns upon the world once more
And workmen to their labors venture forth.

With levers and with ropes they pull the stone
Hard up the hill to rest at her new home
The marble form is raised, where she may ever fix her gaze
For countless time and eras yet unknown.

The workmen strain to use their tools of art
To bringeth forth her image from their heart
As time and labor makes her image seen
They long for that which was and could have been.

And after time and effort forms her face
They all fall to their knees in that high place
The Goddess form complete, causes hearts to skip a beat
At the perfection in her shape and in her grace.

If your manly heart has ever known the love
That is mystic, unexplained and from above
Then I know you can also see her face
And may well have had visions of this place

For that love is ecstatic, young and true
Even if the Goddess wasn't meant for you
You hold her in your heart, for she is God's own work of art
And you shall treasure her for ages on and through.

Oh, I should add that "Sugar" was the nickname of a young lady I once knew. LOL

SUGAR
Of all the things I've sampled with experience most ample
Sugar is the sweetest thing I've had.
Upon my tongue she's lingered, and I've rubbed her on my fingers
Just to lick her off with smiles broad and glad.
Her form is one of sweetness, simple style and uniqueness
Yet her flavor is the rarest thing I've known.
All spices she surpasses, and not even lovely lasses
Can compare to the flavor she has shown.
The bliss that she inspires, as each taste I do admire
Is far better than any other deed or feat.
No thought of health or illness could bring my tongue to stillness
No, not when there's still sugar there to eat.