I'm sure they do, it's just I usually make the topic the title and I dont make the title till I'm done, lol.

Sorry, I meant rhythm, or pace, the rhyming is excellent.

This is great, but I could give you some advice to help keep the rythm a little better, if you like.

Thanks, I have a few hundred on a cd somewhere, but I need to find a converter to tranfer the files, I dont have the program I wrote them with on my pc, lol.

Perfect one? no such thing, twice I've met a woman that was perfect for me, and twice she was already married, its torture, lol.

"Do you know how it feels?"

Do you know how it feels,
to love and not be loved back,
to feel a heart so full of love,
fade and slowly turn black.

Do you know how it feels,
to think that you've found the one,
that could help end your pain,
only to find that your pain has only begun.

Do you know how it feels,
to look into somebodys eyes,
so deeply, only to see,
a soul filled only with lies.

Do you know how it feels,
to long to be held,
but the only arms that will hold you,
will take you to hell.

Do you know how it feels,
to live in a world of one night stands,
its hard to love a woman,
that already has a man.

Do you know how it feels,
to be so lonely that your heart turns numb,
so much that you can't even feel it beating,
it's something I have yet to overcome.

I am a poet,
this is me,
most don't know it,
others can clearly see,

I am a lover,
I am a fighter,
I am not just another,
person in search of a fight,

I am a friend,
I am an enemy,
I stand by my friends untill the end,
from those who don't love me, I don't care what is said of me,

I am a youth,
but I am the future, it's no surprise,
because I speak the truth,
in this world of lies.

What do you do,
when you lose your job,
do you pick yourself back up,
or sit at home and sob,

What do you do,
when you lose your best friend,
do you look at whats stil good in your life,
or do you just wish it would end,

What do you do,
when somebody you care about dies,
do you try to just hide the pain,
or do you cry until no more tears come from your eyes,

What do you do,
when theres no where to hide,
when you have to fight your demons,
and nobodys on your side,

What do you do,
when you know youre not loved,
do you look for your gun,
or someone up above,

What do you do,
when your options are few,
and everybody only lies,
but only to you,

What do you do,
when youre losing your mind,
when only more questions and no answers,
are all you can seem to find.

And yes Mel is the sh**, oh yeah, somebody tell Blinkin to fix his boobs,

"WAIT, WHERE ARE YOU GOING?, I was gonna make Espresso!"

Yep, no better way to start the morning, lol.