Here is your chance. I am starting this forum to find out what i am doing wrong and what faults i have. I have had to great marriages that turned out bad in the end. So, now i am going to let you ladies ask anything you want and i will give an honest answer. I want to be in love and be there for someone heart and soul. I have always tried to do this but have failed. Not sure if it was my fault or i am a bad judge of character. I am very blunt and to the point but honest with every answer.
So feel free to ask anything you want. Ladies only. I will respond as soon as i can and feel free to critique me if you like. All opinions are welcome with no ramification. Thanks. Jason

Bodies Entangled!

Laying in her arms, wrapped between her legs.
All sorts of wonderful things begin to happen,
her long gentle fingers begin to search my chest.

While her heart beats drum through my chest, the heat of her breath on my neck.
My mouth waters as she whispers, words of sweet passion in my ear.
Her leg runs up and down my leg, I lay still uncertain of what is to happen next.

Only knowing that when I do come, IT WILL BE HEAVENLY.
A word of pure delight, HEAVENLY.
Free and with all my might, as she gently raises up and crawls over my body.
My body is like ICE, and hers is like Fire.
On top of me she lays, breathing deep and long.
The anticipation is growing, as our bodies meet.

Many words are uttered, lost in breath and wit.
She says, Take me, I want you.
Something else, just a hurt.
As our bodies become one, great anguish is released.
Collaged together, pressed so neat.
Breaking down sound barriers inside, Tearing down the wall of inclusion.

To a world so big, just we abide.
The passion succumbs us, locked in the tide.
Only thing removes us in curiosity and pride.
As air tries to escape.

Sweat overtakes us, dripping down my brow.
Rolling off her back.
Tender sweet biting, on her ear, on my lips.

Time has come for climactic origins and new heights.
Clear and present pleasure,
Flowing long, hard and wet.
Like hot sticky candy sprayed on her breast.
We lay there in a field of dreams.

Bodies unfolding, Blissful and wonderful.
Falling apart at the seams, after there are words of applause and phrases of delight.
We had reached a new plateau.
In one HEAVENLY night.