Just looking for some honest feedback.. good or bad go for it lol.. just be mature about it ya know

Would like an oppurtunity to meet a woman be4 the big move, someone to show me the city and interact with on the outside of Navy. Very excited to go but a little nervous b/c ive never been to Chicago be4. Any help would be appreciated. Brandon- Ps: check out my profile plssss :)

20 years this place called home
Livin' life and ready to roam
Friends gained and lost in time*
I give my thoughts n form a poem

Trying my hardest to get ahead
Achieving goals for failing I dread
Although set-backs can be a sign*
Praying for positive the night be4 bed

Decisions are made, conclusions are set
Let my choices steer free from regret
Follow a trail of fortune in line*
My outcome a time to never forget

Take a stand and preech an oath
Be more passive than brag and boast
Let yourself be one of a kind*
Than dream your reality to be the most

Created by little poet' Brandon- check out the profile peoples! Take care and best wishes to everyone!

Yeah i just checked this and saw "prisoner" reply. Sir... I dont know why you would feel proud to admit you have no real feelings, and personally you are a coward. I could go on and on but he'll probably never see this anyways lol. Thank you everyone else though for your comments, Ill be sure to check out your profiles and write my thoughts as well if i'm allowed to write you! take care everyone and best wishes!

This site is pretty cool, so far I like it a lot! If any women would like to pass a fair judgement of how im doing feel free, appreciate it much. Criticism is also welcome, just dont be too mean lol. Peace everyone and good-luck with your own ambitions!!!

Name is Brandon Lavallee, 20 years old. Profession is 6 year contract in the United States Navy, advanced electronics computer field. Be4 I ship out to basic in July, I joined this mingle2 site to meet some new friends. I currently live in PA, but will be in bootcamp soon which is half hour north from Chicago. I'd like to get to know some possible dates for the big city which I have never visited yet. If you read this, check out my profile and if you relate, send me a message and we can get to know each other better. Im a very honest young man whose rather up front about any issues in the way. Like taking things slow? <--- here ya go! I hope to hear from someone new, make my day :) take care everyone and goodluck with your ambitions! Peace-