Topic: Don't Quit
lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:14 AM
There is a rat
Here in the woodpile
See him there
With his winning smile

He knows you're watching
And leads you on
He loves the game
But this is wrong

He's sitting there
Just out of reach
There is a lesson
But who will teach

With cold eyes
That shine so bright
He sees through you
And knows not right

He's long and handsome
In his own way
And so your heart
He thinks will stay

You've caught him now
What will you do
Teach him a lesson
Or say it's through

He paces and worries
In his cage
He finally sees you
Now holding your rage

Now that you know
You've figured him out
Leave him there
And have no doubt

It hurts right now
Cause you let him in
Don't worry girl
He didn't win

Hold your head up
Stand don't sit
You beat him girl
So now don't quit


This is for the men of my past that thought they could break me. I don't quit...

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:16 AM
Good write!

Never Quit!

flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:19 AM
Thanks MsT!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou



Sorry this was so dark... I needed some closure on the past and now it feels good to have it out!flowerforyou

nightruler's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:25 AM
There he sat
prick in hand
with a pic
of another man
fooled too much
and got away
until the day
god made him gay
so whats now
my squirrel whats up
beneath this tree
I dream of nuts
not the kind
that elephants win
but the ones
that bang on my chin
and so he sat
just whaling and wanking
thinking his monkey
needed a spanking
but it wasn't she
that got him off
its because he tivo'd
david hasslehoff
now men in tights
became his thing
and like a soprano
he would sing
so to all you girls
with a broken heart
whos to say his last banging
didnt end with a fart

sasfire75's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:26 AM
Very beautiful and well put sis...couldnt have said it better myself to all the men that done me wrongflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:27 AM
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lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:28 AM

There he sat
prick in hand
with a pic
of another man
fooled too much
and got away
until the day
god made him gay
so whats now
my squirrel whats up
beneath this tree
I dream of nuts
not the kind
that elephants win
but the ones
that bang on my chin
and so he sat
just whaling and wanking
thinking his monkey
needed a spanking
but it wasn't she
that got him off
its because he tivo'd
david hasslehoff
now men in tights
became his thing
and like a soprano
he would sing
so to all you girls
with a broken heart
whos to say his last banging
didnt end with a fart



((((((((((JT))))))))))flowerforyou You crack me up!! Thanks for being my friend!!!flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 09:30 AM

Very beautiful and well put sis...couldnt have said it better myself to all the men that done me wrongflowerforyou


Thanks Sass!flowerforyou :heart:


KCflowerforyou flowerforyou thanks for the flowers!

no photo
Sun 03/30/08 11:52 AM

There is a rat
Here in the woodpile
See him there
With his winning smile

He knows you're watching
And leads you on
He loves the game
But this is wrong

He's sitting there
Just out of reach
There is a lesson
But who will teach

With cold eyes
That shine so bright
He sees through you
And knows not right

He's long and handsome
In his own way
And so your heart
He thinks will stay

You've caught him now
What will you do
Teach him a lesson
Or say it's through

He paces and worries
In his cage
He finally sees you
Now holding your rage

Now that you know
You've figured him out
Leave him there
And have no doubt

It hurts right now
Cause you let him in
Don't worry girl
He didn't win

Hold your head up
Stand don't sit
You beat him girl
So now don't quit


This is for the men of my past that thought they could break me. I don't quit...



Ok I demand to know who hid this well written and clever little gem from me???? Damn sister, this was just plain old FUN and you nailed it. I love it!flowerforyou flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 11:58 AM
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awwwwwwwww... your words are like stars in my sky!flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/30/08 12:00 PM

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awwwwwwwww... your words are like stars in my sky!flowerforyou flowerforyou


Just speaking the truth. Now dont you be hiding your work so well anymore Miss Thing or I'll have to beat you with a stick! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 03/30/08 12:04 PM


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awwwwwwwww... your words are like stars in my sky!flowerforyou flowerforyou


Just speaking the truth. Now dont you be hiding your work so well anymore Miss Thing or I'll have to beat you with a stick! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou



LOL! Gotta catch me first!laugh laugh laugh

iraceslowcars's photo
Mon 03/31/08 05:22 PM



blushing blushing blushing
awwwwwwwww... your words are like stars in my sky!flowerforyou flowerforyou


Just speaking the truth. Now dont you be hiding your work so well anymore Miss Thing or I'll have to beat you with a stick! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


I'll hold her for you...devil


LOL! Gotta catch me first!laugh laugh laugh

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 06:30 PM




blushing blushing blushing
awwwwwwwww... your words are like stars in my sky!flowerforyou flowerforyou


Just speaking the truth. Now dont you be hiding your work so well anymore Miss Thing or I'll have to beat you with a stick! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


I'll hold her for you...devil


LOL! Gotta catch me first!laugh laugh laugh



Who let you out?!laugh laugh laugh

no photo
Mon 03/31/08 06:38 PM
LC,,,,Nice way to CUT his whats TIED,lol

And JT, YOUR just ate up dude,lol

And LC KEEP an out on JT, if YOU see him in TIGHTS ley me know.
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh

GOOD WRITE here by you BOTH!!!!drinker drinker bigsmile

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/31/08 06:44 PM

LC,,,,Nice way to CUT his whats TIED,lol

And JT, YOUR just ate up dude,lol

And LC KEEP an out on JT, if YOU see him in TIGHTS ley me know.
laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh

GOOD WRITE here by you BOTH!!!!drinker drinker bigsmile


Thanks Terry!!flowerforyou

JT is nothing to worry about he is just the odd side of me coming out and showing me his love... For that I love him dearly!:wink: :wink:

I would like people to understand something about me and this poem... I am in no way judging others by the things that have happened to me in the past. I do not judge and I do my best to be open to new people until they give me a reason not to be. This was meant as a way for me to sevre ties to past situations not hold onto them and carry them forth.

My head is held high and I will survive with God all around me.flowerforyou