Topic: Emotions
Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/29/08 06:18 PM


Keyboards alive with simple emotions,
Feeling inside are these simple notions.
Keys I press without a thought,
Writing that was never taught.

Quicker now this keyboard goes,
Living as the feeling grows.
Growing into fevered pitch,
Magic flies like a switch.

Never knowing what to write,
Feelings fly into the night,
As I travel through the clouds,
Looking down upon the crowds.

Sitting in a single file,
Waiting as a single tile.
Now I see the grassy fields,
Blowing down beneath a shield.

Passing through another cloud,
Faster as I pass the crowd.
Crowded ways beneath my feet,
Closer now another street.

Take the path I can see,
Travels now seem so free.
As I feel the hurt and pain,
Now I know the things I gain.

Writing now like none before,
Keys are stroked forever more.
Feelings filled with love and devotion,
Feel my soul with true emotion.

Felt so long ago it seems,
Taken from a faded dream.
Dreams of times so far away,
Once again I pray they stay.

Stay with me emotions clear,
Now I hold them very dear.
Feelings inside no longer notions,
Feelings inside I’m alive with emotions.




James1234567's photo
Sat 03/29/08 06:27 PM
alright drinker drinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 03/29/08 06:29 PM
(((((Gryphyn))))))

Riddles, rhymes
and rhythmic lines,
to my mind explain.
With great insight,
throughout the night,
taught through your refrain.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/29/08 06:41 PM
happy drinker drinker drinker

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/29/08 07:08 PM

(((((Gryphyn))))))

Riddles, rhymes
and rhythmic lines,
to my mind explain.
With great insight,
throughout the night,
taught through your refrain.

We all learn a thing or two by understanding what we read. I for one love reading again and as a result found writing is far more than meets the eye.

bigsmile bigsmile

G

EarthSprite's photo
Sat 03/29/08 09:08 PM
"I'm alive with emotions"...happy

Just beautiful....flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 03/30/08 07:56 PM
bigsmile :heart: flowerforyou

So many emotions fill my mind,,, So much pondering goin on with the wonderin

sealove42's photo
Sun 03/30/08 08:02 PM
Well done, creativly expressedflowerforyou

sealove42's photo
Sun 03/30/08 08:02 PM
Well done, creativly expressedflowerforyou