Topic: Possibly needs improvement
Army_Strong's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:46 PM
I don't know if it's my profile or just me. Let me know what you think.

azrae1l's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:47 PM
it's the women that need improvement....

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:48 PM
love YUMlove YUMlove

PATSFAN's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:49 PM
Hang in bro.. you will be fine:smile:

Queene123's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:50 PM
your just beganing dont worry about your profile its fine

funandfriendly1's photo
Tue 03/25/08 09:50 PM
Don't worry you will find the right one! It just takes time! flowerforyou

Army_Strong's photo
Wed 03/26/08 11:22 AM

it's the women that need improvement....

LOL thanks.

krazykitty323's photo
Wed 03/26/08 11:26 AM
Looks great to me :wink:

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Wed 03/26/08 01:30 PM


it's the women that need improvement....

LOL thanks.



He's just bitter laugh laugh laugh


The women are just fine. Give it some timedrinker

Nickinolosers's photo
Wed 03/26/08 01:43 PM

it's the women that need improvement....


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FireOfThePhoenix's photo
Wed 03/26/08 01:45 PM
Good things come to those who wait flowerforyou

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Wed 03/26/08 01:48 PM


it's the women that need improvement....


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flowerforyou Don't pay him any mind.flowerforyou

love Women are beautifullove

laugh And a helluva lot smarter than guyslaugh


TheShadow's photo
Wed 03/26/08 03:22 PM



it's the women that need improvement....


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flowerforyou Don't pay him any mind.flowerforyou

love Women are beautifullove

laugh And a helluva lot smarter than guyslaugh




Well we let women think there smarter that islaugh

Nickinolosers's photo
Wed 03/26/08 03:50 PM




it's the women that need improvement....


grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble




flowerforyou Don't pay him any mind.flowerforyou

love Women are beautifullove

laugh And a helluva lot smarter than guyslaugh




Well we let women think there smarter that islaugh



Excuse ME huh


bigsmile

no photo
Wed 03/26/08 04:00 PM





it's the women that need improvement....


grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble grumble




flowerforyou Don't pay him any mind.flowerforyou

love Women are beautifullove

laugh And a helluva lot smarter than guyslaugh




Well we let women think there smarter that islaugh



Excuse ME huh


bigsmile



kick his nuts nickilaugh

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Thu 03/27/08 03:39 AM

I don't know if it's my profile or just me. Let me know what you think.



Okay, here is what I think.

Omit "I 've had nothing but bad luck in relationships." We all have bad luck, but it is something one should not admit to since it implies that there is something wrong with you.

Delete "Blah blah blah." You sound like a wiseguy.

Good grief! Erase "I've never been attractive to most women I guess." You are a nice-looking guy. Saying that is a turn off since no woman wants a man who is not attractive to most women.

Also leave out "It's not like I don't try but apparently everyone wants a little dude who is going to treat them wrong." You are complaining and making youself sound like a loser.

Leave the rest of your essay as it is; it is great.




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Thu 03/27/08 05:08 AM
Welcome and best wishes.
And, what leahmarie says is correct.
The only other thing that comes to mind is that since you are about to leave for the Army, gals may not want to start something that has to be discontinued.... flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou