Topic: booze
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Mon 03/24/08 11:45 PM
trapped in the armpit of the ozarks
gunmetal tickling my pallete
only creeping death, relieves my misery
creeping death, from the local grocers cooler
i sit, dumping inevitable failure, down my craw
i swallow, i weep, i vomit, i sleep
can't let go, who'd want to
can't let go, i have to
the will to live dwindling
holding, what is hopefully my last breath,
the only hope i retain
only to be let down, once again, as i pass out
no relief only regretdevil devil

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Mon 03/24/08 11:48 PM
very well written,
Sad, but well written.

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Mon 03/24/08 11:50 PM
Edited by muntjack on Mon 03/24/08 11:57 PM

very well written,
Sad, but well written.
it is quite old, wrote it a long time ago. had to kick the drink

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Mon 03/24/08 11:52 PM


very well written,
Sad, but well written.
it is quite old, write it a long time ago. had to kick the drink

That's good to hear.
Hope you have many blessings ahead of you in your life:smile:

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Tue 03/25/08 12:32 AM
wowzerz

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Tue 03/25/08 01:01 AM

it is quite old, wrote it a long time ago. had to kick the drink

Nice write. I had to kick the drink too.

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Tue 03/25/08 04:00 AM
:cry: This sadden me... :cry:
I know way too many people in just this situation...
Good write!