Topic: sunset on sea
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Mon 03/24/08 05:16 PM
was a suicidal sun setting on the seven seas
a rotisserie turkey burning with redundancy
a deliberant drowning a dowsing of the day
is a spinning day-glo yo-yo breaking away

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Mon 03/24/08 05:28 PM
oh yeah, something twisting and turning in me, you should be over twenty one when you read this

jimmy

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Mon 03/24/08 05:36 PM

oh yeah, something twisting and turning in me, you should be over twenty one when you read this

jimmy

thanks jim
rolls off the tongue