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Hey guys. Here's a poem that I was hesistant to post at first...
Being with out you, leaves my heart empty. You were a piece of me- that is now missing Thoughts and memories of you depresses me and bring me to tears- good times and that orrccured through the years, as well as what should have happened and shouldn't have stays with me. You've given me so much pleasure, but yet caused me so much pain I wish I were over you, but memories of you still remain. |
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<<<<<Puddle of tears....that touched me, deeply! That is BEAUTIFUL!
GREAT WORK! |
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Thanks. It came straight from the heart.
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Will...I wished I had wrote those words...BEAUTIFUL as you are, gal!
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Beautiful words hon.There are no finer words,then those straight from
the heart.Is Poetry not fantastic or what?"I Love It"Oh Yeah!very nice to meet you also.Godspeed!Cybear. p.s.Welcome to the JSH ;)and I'll see you in the forums. |
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Thanks Dreamweaverangel and Cyberbear. I might post other poems up soon.
Yes, poetry is beautiful indeed. |
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well there u go cutie u said sstright from mine! that was great!
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That was great. Thank you.
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too kewl cutie!
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