razorblade reality

Everyday I wake...
how long will it take...
to numb the pain...
here it comes agian...

I walk across a floor of shattered glass...
my future seems like one big past...
The shower i take flows alcohol...
It burns the cuts, it burns them all...

stitches wither...
scars they fade...
but the pain I feel...
never goes away...

lifes a scab...
I continue to pick...
the wounds are deep...
the cuts too thick...

what will ever...
become of me...
I pray for it not...
to become a razorblade reality....

Way too depressing

it will get better babe...remember im here for ya

I guess everybodys too busy in the hump the person above you post

Sounds like a cutters poem to me...
There is help for this kind of pain...

everyone back off of making assumtions just because the poetry is a little dark... tis a good way of expressing yourself withough being told that you need help. so back off.... i write in this type of genre too but ask anyone whos met me how fun loving i really am

I found it instantly drawing...

intense, and raw.... perfect!

Thankyou...

I enjoyed the ride into the darkerside...of a razorblade reality.

Why, I ask do most assume poems have to be about sugary sweet subjects like love and rambling roses above a thatched cottage door?
A good writer has imagination ( it is the basic functionality )I sometimes feel I would like to write poetry from a man's perspective............

Johnboy, a very good poem.

Yes, I have a darkside... Im just not afriad to show it... There are alot of other ways I could express myself... You can post in too hot or not post... Or you can express your true feelings... You have to embrace your feelings or they will consume you... I am not fake... If Im happy im happy, If im sad, im sad. I dont front... I am not on here to protray any false images of myself... What you see is what you get...

GOOD POEM, with a good reason, and time will fix life, not
any other means will touch.

You have a hole, and you can't seem to fill it, before your throwing the dirt back out of it.

FEEL the DAMM HOLE,,and FEEL released and let her pain go as easy as it was first found.

Just MY between the lines reading,ok? GOOD LUCK.

John, this is really good.
I feel your pain and wish you all the ahppiness in the world. You are not alone here or ever...