Alright so maybe my last one was a little depressing...so I will share this one which is not...I think.


now the days of decay are fading
the light is slowly approaching
and in the distance I can see you
the shadows on your face disappearing
the warmth in your eyes
radiating through my body
your smile mesmerizes me
putting my mind at ease
all the tears wasted
and all the pain I’ve felt
now don’t mean anything
if this is where it has led me
I would not hesitate
to relive every second

NOW THAT IS ONE HUNDRED PERCENT BETTER YOU HAVE A EXTRODENERY GIFT AS LONG AS IT IS WORDED IN WAYS THAT ARE NOT SO HARSH BUT DONT EVER LOOSE YOUR GIFT BECAUSE IT IS WHAT MAKES YOU THE PERSON YOU ARE THANKS FOR SHAREING YOUR POEMS WITH ALL OF US AT JUST SAY HI

Thanks for the kind words ...I write during emotional times in my life so at times it might seem a little morbid or sad but there is also the ones full of optimism.

I liked both actually... each showing a different, completely different, aspect of thought, and life...
Good writes, and keep posting!

The best writtings are very emotional!