Topic: karma
Desiderata83's photo
Fri 03/21/08 01:32 AM
In the dark recesses of my mind
I can see my hands around your neck
I can see the transference of pain
From my body to yours
But you and I know that I can never hurt you
My love for you will never allow it
But I’m able to live with the comfort of knowing
that one day your time will come
Because karma finds us all
And you will not be able to hide
And when that day arrives
You will realize
how much you pain you caused
Because you will feel what I’ve felt
And you will discover
that the heart is fragile
And that it cannot be handled
With careless hands

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Fri 03/21/08 01:44 AM
OK I GET THE WHOLE KARMA THING AND FEELING BUT YOUR POEM ABOUT CHOKEING THE LIFE OUT OF SOMEONE IS JUST MASSIVELY CREEPY ITS JUST WRONG MAYBE THAT PART OF THE POEM YOU SHOULD OF KEPT TO YOUR SELF devil devil noway noway noway

Desiderata83's photo
Fri 03/21/08 01:46 AM
The point of that line is not me killing her literally..its transfering the pain she caused back into her body...its metaphorical

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 03/21/08 07:19 AM
smokin