Topic: in the ward again
jimz's photo
Thu 03/20/08 04:30 PM
the screening device's light
was blinking
I was staring deep
into the light
but I lost focus
when they strapped
me down

I began to just

I looked up
and the ceiling's
fluorescent lights
were invading the tour
that swarmed inside my head

I became sad just sad

they stood around me
their white uniforms
became a dull light

I heard them talk about
some other me
that was listening
somewhere else

I closed my eyes
but the lights
creased through
my pupils
soldering inside
and surrounding me
like a sea
surrounds an island

I became mad just mad

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 03/20/08 04:37 PM
(((jimz)))

James1234567's photo
Thu 03/20/08 04:41 PM
glasses

ladyblack67's photo
Thu 03/20/08 04:48 PM
ok, if I didn't know that you put this stuff up a lot, I would be scared, BUT, I know that you put this stuff up, so i think I like it

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/20/08 06:00 PM
((((( Jimmy ))))

Love & Light flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Thu 03/20/08 09:49 PM
flowerforyou jim this is also superb flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 03/21/08 07:29 AM
Well written Jim but made me shudderflowerforyou flowerforyou