Topic: Void
JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:55 PM
If empathy swallows disgust, than dispair has to eat passion...
The collective unconcious of the whole is ending, but always beginning
An icy mystic reveals intimate feelings of rage and mistrust,
A sensual push...
elapsed between the hunger of desire and fright
Quenched yet aching,
released deep within the agony of remembrance
Visions of silken exctasy whisper her name and violate her mind
Scattered obsessions blur,
confused and conformed...
mesmerized
Consumed by the shivering flesh overtaking her body,
her heart,her soul...
A lustfull quiver,releasing the hidden torment and craving
The moist touces of perpetual love,
dreaming and seeing and feeling,
Exactly what she needs...
Let us touch the shattered glass that penetrates her existance,
Engulfed again in the mirror that is resting on her angel's wing...

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:58 PM
what no one is gonna reply

redhead44613's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:58 PM
drinker drinker wow....just...wow. all I can say thats amazing

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:59 PM
Yay
i take it you like it

redhead44613's photo
Tue 03/18/08 09:59 PM

Yay
i take it you like it
very much.. thats a great poem... love it

Runpenzo's photo
Tue 03/18/08 10:00 PM
Very pure, very raw... Very good...

JeremyCastle's photo
Tue 03/18/08 10:00 PM
i have another one in the same forum under another poem tell me what you think
i also have one on my profile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/19/08 11:58 AM
WOW is right! That is really good!
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