Topic: Glad You're not Here
Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 03/17/08 12:28 AM
Glad You're not Here

There you were
A gem so highly prized
Until you lost veneer
And then you lost your price.

The heart you hid within your lies
Was felt too late alas
And now you're sitting there
Wondering where I'm at.

You can't control my life no more
Your bed is vacant cold
I wonder if you really care
Now that you're on your own.

The twists and turns of life my dear
Don't forget what treasons gave
But I'll forgive you one last time
Now that I see your bed is made.

I really don't care what you think of me
I know I have my quirks
Remember how you met me dear
And look now upon the jerk.

For each life you take,
You use, not keep
I'm glad you're not here with me.

Fadedspirit 3/17/2008

DTHRomeo's photo
Mon 03/17/08 12:34 AM
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Dragonbite's photo
Mon 03/17/08 12:34 AM
cool

wilkit's photo
Mon 03/17/08 12:43 AM


Very well written.

flowerforyou drinker

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 03/17/08 12:50 AM
Thanks DTHRomeo. drinker

Glad you liked it Dragonbite. :smile:

Thanks wilkit.:smile: drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/17/08 06:38 AM
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I so hear this one! Good write! (((Fade)))

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 03/17/08 10:17 AM
a wee bit angst-y???????