Cant believe what ive seen.
Cant believe what i saw.
Cant believe the things you've shown me.
That made me drop my jaw.

You shown me a heaven
I never knew could exist
I fell for u so badly
Now i cant resist


Right or wrong, all day long
I'll hold my head up
Keep movin' on.
Remain strong,
All night long
Till the day comes,
That your gone

Disagree, with the way
your makin me
Feelin broken, im left
Wanting you, desperately
So damn tired, of all the games
I tried to not love you,
But my heart still remains
Forever more,
no one but yours

I wish this, could be, exactly
The way we said it'd be
You and I, intertwined,
4 all eternity
I hope, u know, how bad i had it
I'll never forget, or regret, swear
I wont get over it.

Right or wrong, all day long
I'll hold my head up
And keep movin' on.
Remain strong,
All night long
till the day comes,
That your gone

Right or wrong, all day long
I'll hold my head up
And keep movin' on.
Remain strong,
All night long
till the day comes,
That your gone

Remain strong,
All night long
till the day comes,
That your gone

i guess this is a song, nice one though.

You gotta love those in your face last things to say to your ex type songs..this ones filled with emotion,and for lack of a better word,it's perfect/awesome
JT

Fair well my Love, without any tears.

thanks for the posts

Terrific flow. I loved the way this poem was put together...
(lol, excellent punctuation and line breaks really)
Not to mention, the depth that these lines brought to the table!