I know its short and sweet but sometimes that works best,

Is it? short and sweet?

well yep you'll have to like me because I'm "nice"!!!

I don't believe that short and sweet is best. Personally, in order to make decisions, I require information.

I like your pictures. It would be good if you could put more pix in there when you can, even if it's just your pets, or whatever. Something that says "you".

Your essay needs a lot more detail. You should take some time to tell us what makes you special; and what you are looking for in a person. What is important to you? What makes you you? What do you really seek in a mate?

I think it's interesting that you are a mushroom farmer.