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can i ask you a question
what is it that you see when you take a moment to stop and stare at me do you see the baby who's mother was just sixteen who didnt have a clue as to what raising a lil girl would mean or do you see the little girl who dad had to go when the military called and when she asked when he'd come back he said he didnt know do you see the teenager who was always left at home always feeling lonely cause she was always left alone or do you see the young woman who turned into a lady because she thought she'd found love and ended up alone with a baby do you see the woman that i have tried to become strong, loyal, and full of love or do you only see where it is i have come from |
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very nice
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thank you
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very nice |
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Edited by
higlander
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Sat 03/15/08 06:45 PM
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hey you wonderful mamy this flowers for you
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hey you wonderful mamy this flowers for you thank you |
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That a very good poem.
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That a very good poem. ty |
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Ok,I know you're expecting me to cleverly fit the word awesome somewhere in here,but I'm not gonna this time
I think the poem that you posted here shows a very hard look at your life,and triumphantly the obstacles that you had to overcome..so thank you for sharing this,and for inspiring others to face their trials and tribulations...good job. |
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this is a question
you know you need not ask of me look at yourself hear my words close your eyes and see the echo of a valley heard many times when to this echo point hopeful callers climb to say hello |
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Ok,I know you're expecting me to cleverly fit the word awesome somewhere in here,but I'm not gonna this time I think the poem that you posted here shows a very hard look at your life,and triumphantly the obstacles that you had to overcome..so thank you for sharing this,and for inspiring others to face their trials and tribulations...good job. thank you |
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this is a question you know you need not ask of me look at yourself hear my words close your eyes and see the echo of a valley heard many times when to this echo point hopeful callers climb to say hello |
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Hey Noel.. It's so nice to see your words flow across these pages, and to maybe grasp, if just a hint, the inner soul that is you.
Thank you for spilling the past (yours?) secrets of the character in this poetry... The reader is definately left stronger for it, and, it's just nice to see you around the boards.! Peace out girlie, stay chill. |
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Hey Noel.. It's so nice to see your words flow across these pages, and to maybe grasp, if just a hint, the inner soul that is you. Thank you for spilling the past (yours?) secrets of the character in this poetry... The reader is definately left stronger for it, and, it's just nice to see you around the boards.! Peace out girlie, stay chill. thanks love..keep in touch , and yea its about me |
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Hey Noel.. It's so nice to see your words flow across these pages, and to maybe grasp, if just a hint, the inner soul that is you. Thank you for spilling the past (yours?) secrets of the character in this poetry... The reader is definately left stronger for it, and, it's just nice to see you around the boards.! Peace out girlie, stay chill. thanks love..keep in touch , and yea its about me Well, the smiles that you show in your pictures (like many people take pictures that aren't smiling, lol) Show just how strong you are, And how well you've perservered. Keep smiling, It suits you. |
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sweet.....
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Love your heart Noel...
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thanks for sharing a little about you. Very nice.
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I SEE a girl trapped in a womens body.
But to scared to stand up and say PLEASE,,,,,TAKE ME!!!! But I have been acused of being insane,,,,,,,,,SO!!!!! |
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