Topic: walk a thousand miles
stevil342001's photo
Sat 03/15/08 05:22 PM
walk a thousand miles


Id walk a thousand miles
just to be with you,holding
you close to my heart know my heart
is true.

as i lay by your side the wind catches
a glimpse of the sweet smell of your perfume
i can smell it now my love....

As you lay by my side i cant help but hear
your heart as it races...along with mine..oh how i wish
time stood still..so forever we could dine...

id walk a thousand miles, just to hear you say you love me
and i love you.....if only for a thousand miles i would be with you



written by steve... aka stevil 3 15-08

theels08's photo
Sat 03/15/08 05:23 PM
Edited by theels08 on Sat 03/15/08 05:23 PM
i would walk 1,000 mile just to see my girl happy

ellmay's photo
Sat 03/15/08 05:31 PM
cool poem love it

no photo
Sat 03/15/08 05:33 PM
And I would walk 500 hundred miles and I would walk 500 more just to be the man who'd walked 1,000 miles, to fall down at your door.

Your poem, so lovely, reminded me of that crazy song. Was it from Benny & Joon? By the Proclaimers.

I LOVE your prose verse. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou Accolades for you~~~ Where have you been all of my life??

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/15/08 09:32 PM
Awwwwwwwwww Steve how nice a write! flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 03/16/08 11:49 PM
Very nice.