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Topic: Always in the Wrong
sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 03/14/08 07:22 PM
Ok here is a lil piece I have come up with it may not be good but at least I tried... As i sit here wondering why men can be so wrong yet can make themselfs look like there not in the wrong.I wonder why some men can lie cheat break your heart and yet i wonder where i have gone wrong.I think it over and know im not in the wrong but they always make me look like im in the wrong...Maybe sometime in the future some men will due no wrong but til then I guess I will always be in the wrong... 3/14/08 By:Shannon A.K.A. SASSY

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 03/14/08 07:22 PM


sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 03/14/08 07:24 PM
TY MIRROR

stevil342001 Joined Sun 07/29/07 Posts: 804	Fri 03/14/08 07:28 PM
i thank god today i can admit when am wrong.. very nice work!!

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 03/14/08 07:34 PM
ty stevil

tyfrench9 Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 3587	Fri 03/14/08 07:35 PM
Good work hun... You are amazing you know that.

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 03/14/08 07:36 PM
Good work hun... You are amazing you know that. ty TY sweetie I do try to be

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 03/15/08 01:55 AM
Sas, those men that can't admit when they are wrong are to prideful, and don't want to be held accountable for their own mistakes.. A true man will have no problem admitting when he is wrong.. I know I don't

me2g Joined Fri 02/08/08 Posts: 1285	Sat 03/15/08 02:01 AM
well put

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 03/15/08 03:49 AM
Interesting write! Not all men will treat you that way- hold on the good ones are out there!

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Sat 03/15/08 08:26 AM
ty Daniel,teddy,and me2g

Jamie82 Joined Tue 05/08/07 Posts: 14951	Sat 03/15/08 08:31 AM
hang in there sas

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Sat 03/15/08 09:16 AM
hang in there sas ty Jamie

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