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Silent Warning
My face is scarred and splintered, My strength has ebbed away. My eyes have faded over, I've seen my better day. The skies are dark and lonely, I've seen all that I can see. My pallid face I hide away, And I'm half the man I used to be. The good old days were long ago, Never lasted very long. And you turn your eyes away in fright, As I sing my old man's song. You look at me and grimace, Your thoughts are hard and cold. Kind words you can no more find for me, Now that I've turned old... You give me your look of pity, I turn my face and cry. You can't understand that all I want, Is to finally lie down and die. You do not want to think of me, You think I'm slow my mind is numb. And I'm just here to remind you, Your time is soon to come. So heed this silent warning, Because time will soon be gone. And you will end up just like me, Singing your old man's song. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild 
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 excellent
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Very nice indeed. Mirror was right on with excellent. 
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Thank you Wilkit, I'm glad you agreed with it..
and, of course, MirrorMirror's never far behind, or far off! Flowers for everyone...
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Thank you Wilkit, I'm glad you agreed with it.. and, of course, MirrorMirror's never far behind, or far off! Flowers for everyone...
You are so very much welcome.
Mirror has great taste. (hi mirror  )
I always love reading words that are well written. Keep it coming.
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Anyone want to see another of my poems? Click on 300 dollars, somewhere in the thread.
That aside, wilkit, I definately have no plans on stopping soon. Thanks for the support! |
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Like this one as well.. My style indeed
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Like this one as well.. My style indeed
Allright!!!
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 HEY,,,I resemble THIS!!!! lol,lol
Truth is to LIFE,,MAN...good read... 
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Anyone want to see another of my poems? Click on 300 dollars, somewhere in the thread. That aside, wilkit, I definately have no plans on stopping soon. Thanks for the support! Any time FC (may I call you that?). Please keep me posted.
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Lol Iam4U... I think it happens to all the best of us men, even the worse...
goes right back down to the battle of, my dad could kick your dads ***.... lol. (general comment) Thanks for responding! |
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Any time FC (may I call you that?).
Please keep me posted.
Yes, you may call me FC... I'm not such a cad that I'll make you type out my entire SN... lol 300 is somewhere on the main poetry board, not this thread... You've been entered on the "keep me posted" board. Thanks again, wilkit |
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Good write!
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