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Topic: Calling All Poets!
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Thu 03/13/08 04:56 PM
Hey everybody... this is also a good place that you might mention needing to have a poem looked at, if you've already posted it else where, and it's not getting enough clicks, or, you might just respost here, and see what a few peeps think real quick.
Lol... Yes, this has a point... Anybody that has time, can you check out, The Way Of The Warrior, in the poetry threads? I could use some feed back on it.

Hey Daniel... YOu might like to check this one out, if you haven't already...

And Silverwaya... I really couldn't say enough.

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Thu 03/13/08 05:11 PM
Here is one that I think didn't get enough credit, it's by Godschosengirl.. a lovely heart felt poem if I say so myself..
(Letting Go)
Where did it go wrong?
What did I do?
Was it really me or was it you?

Could I have done something different?
It started out so right.
You used to call me every night.
I don’t know what happened,
What made you run in fright.

Or was it me that was scared?
I don’t remember now.
It seems so long ago,
Even though it was only hours.
It seems like days long past.

How could this happen,
When things seemed so right?
Was it all an illusion?
Was it all a game?
I don’t think I will never know.

I will never know your thoughts.
The truth will forever evade me,
So I will resolve to let you go if I must.

As you said so simply,
It was nice getting to know you

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Thu 03/13/08 05:46 PM
:heart:~my fellow poets~:heart:I deeply appreciate your writing.Stay well in mind,body & spirit.Godspeed!CyPoetflowerforyou:wink:

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 05:57 PM

:heart:~my fellow poets~:heart:I deeply appreciate your writing.Stay well in mind,body & spirit.Godspeed!CyPoetflowerforyou:wink:
Hey CyPoet, Great to see you here, and thanks for all the kind word for everyone...
Keep popping in if you like.

Daniel, thanks for posting that... It was an excellent read, and I do believe that it did deserve a little more exposure...
Thanks for bringing it here, for everyone to see!
Go GodsChosenGirl!

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Thu 03/13/08 06:12 PM
It was my pleasure Frozn...

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