Any General Feedback would be appreciated.
And, that being said...
Make the words you type have purpose, good, or bad.

This is the first time I have not have a laundry list of constructive suggestions. You essay is lovely; and I always love everyone's pictures.

The only critique, if you want to call it that is that the last line of your essay really sounds to me as if you are looking for a sugar mama. If that is the effect that you are going for, more power to you - it's highly effective.

Hmmm... Well, let me say straight off, thank you... I'm glad that you didn't have a laundry list, as I hate laundry. j/k.
Does the last line really come off that way?
Not that I wouldn't mind a sugar-momma... (I mean, who wouldn't)
Maybe the last line should just be stricken for the record...
Although a lady may have money,
it certainly is not a requirement... nor even important...
Going to think about that, and probably change it...
that isn't really the impression I wanted to give... lol.
Thanks for the honest critique.

Damn! I had my hopes up!

I have noticed that many people who post in "rate my profile" only rate pictures; and many rate only the main pic - I don't think they even look at the profile. Most just say "welcome to JSH" or something equally inane. They are confusing "rate my profile" with "the new members welcome area".

I have always given honest feedback, and what I consider constructive criticism in this forum. I have been blasted for it as well.

One gentleman said to me "I don't criticize your profile and you have no right to criticize mine", and went on to tell me how I would never find anyone or something equally idiotic.

So I just want you to know that I took a risk for you, here.

I read the whole thing.

Well, of course I had to, my Irish brother.

I like the fact that you openly admit that you have made mistakes and that you are a work in progress. I know those aren't your exact words but that is how I understood it.

You also state what kind of woman you are looking for and the only thing I have to say is that it might be a bit intimidating for young girls in their 20's.

Best of Luck

Eireann Go Bragh

Hey I agree but it totally works for us chicks in our 50's.

Hey hey hey... I have no problem with a sugar momma at all... Lol, as long as she doesn't think that's what I'm after overall...
It's just that older women/ladies... are so much more...
(well, everyone knows)
I mean, look at the responses... I'm already overwhelmed with laughter, and appreciation...
and honesty...
You can't find that anywhere else... lol.
Hikerchick,
and Nickinolosers, (like the name)
thanks so much for critique-ing my words, and not my pic!
(irish rule)
And "chicks" in their 50's are hot!

you're profile very informative, you are def one of a kind, and truely genuine.

Ladies- I vote that we keep him!

<<<<<<~~~~~~~~~~~ not 50

so much more what?

Apparently not every one knows

i wanna know too

I know!!!

and...??????

experienced
in touch with what they want
undemanding
comfortable with themselves
fun
smart
aware of what is truly important in life
no longer give a crap what people think of them

Well.. this is certainly an improvement from your last profile. I say "Good Job"...

You no longer come off as a moocher, but rather a sensitive guy really looking for love. Your emphasis changed, and I see that as a good thing. I do not duobt that you were always looking for love, but your words did not reflect that. Now they do.

Good luck to you!

so..i got about 20 yrs ahead of me before this....what to do in the mean time

you ladies are great..i will admit--and most of us take what youre saying seriously and to heart

You have an several of these qualities already

BTW tell Miguel Nicki said HI

yea ill tell him...you might see him first..havent heard from him in a few days...who knows...

Don't give up yet!